I am doing this to learn how to keep a monthly deadline. To put the pressure on, I am publishing these scripts, as well as running commentary on creating a comic script, in my new comic book script blog at http://365comics.wordpress.com/
If you want to go straight to the scripts go here http://365comics.wordpress.com/gallery/
I just posted a new version of issue #1.
We're all writers here, so I don't want to "pitch" you. If you are interested, check it out. If you check it out, let me know what you think.